Okay, I know it was two days later, I'm sorry, computer screwed up and I had to find this again.
I found this the most intellectual thing I've ever read on this site. I like how you characterize sentient beings as ones with the capabilities to expand their horizons rather than beings who have, using prejudice and apathy as examples.
I found the piece that this seems similar to is Allegory of the Cave by Plato, (I'm sure you've heard of it) as you also deal with perception of reality and existence.
All in all, a very interesting piece, although for some reason I feel like I somehow missed the exact purpose of it. I don't know why though... 0.o I usually don't debate or converse on religion and bigger existence issues, I have more clearly formed ideas on racism and prejudice, and more contemporary problems in society. Anyway though, this was very interesting, and I actually printed it out and added it to my "thought provoking pieces" pile that I keep to perhaps read it later.
Btw, if you haven't actually read Allegory of the Cave, I'll be posting an excerpt from it eventually. Again, sorry for the late post.
Typicalanonymous
I will read all of this tomorrow, I promise. But now, I need to get to sleep.
PhoenixGodwin
Thanks, man. Be sure to let me know what you think! I love to see people's opinions of my writing (particularly when people respond reasonably and maturely). Particularly with things like this. I think if you find philosophy and forward-thinking important, then conversation on the matter is critical.