Shyheart 2010-06-29 10:24:32

wow dude you're so edgy and deep

charlie-sheening 2011-05-20 13:01:53

It can be good to get things like this out in poetry. Poetry is an underused form of communication and expression. Wondering if the world would be better off were more poetic devices employed in everyday conversation. People don't seem to realize how little it took to get the ball rolling in this direction on how we communicate with each other. A fungus might grow fractally along a set path of least resistance making us see it as one of many paths a fungus could explore; we could see a wide array of starkly varying pictures and collaborations of color in the tiniest of augmentations to scenario, all from one specimen of fungus. However, if the fungus were like humans, it would see its current path as the only possible one and hold no scrutiny to justifying its history as uniquely universal and of the most potent and logical (possibly even the only) path possible or plausible. A scientist born a year too soon or late, or a war monger accidentally killed before infamousy by a variance of one degree in the turn of a steering wheel by a careless driver.. How many of these unfortunate "what-ifs" HAVE actually occurred, and what changes to our environments and paradigms are required to get us further evolved? Hoping since this poem you have reacquired your trust in fellow creatures. Part of the human condition exposes us all to these thoughts, we are alienated by passing senses of displacement and distrust. Refreshing to see someone else capturing the feeling in poetry. For me, it serves as a reminder on how to pull OUT of feeling deceived by everything